Warped Galaxies: Like Mother,Like Daughter take two

Monday, March 12, 2007

Like Mother,Like Daughter take two

Well, got home from an absolutlely FABULOUS weekend in Toronto (more on that later) to the delightful news that my youngest daughter tied for first place in the elementary division of the school poetry contest that my older daughters placed in last week. Oh, do they make their mama proud!

The Ocean
By Noora Khalid

The water rushing through my hand
As the waves crash upon the sand.
The ocean is so salty.
In walking I have some difficulty.
When it’s dark,
Come the sharks.
Gray as plain as the sea
If you don’t be careful, they’ll bite ye!

Ok, so it's second grade poetry. But she still makes her mama proud!

¶ 10:38 PM

Comments:

Hey, this is great stuff :) Congratulations to your daughter and her proud mama :) She rhymed salty with difficulty, and they'll bite ye, is inspired old english :) Great job.

Ya Haqq!

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Anonymous : 6:46 AM

What a fun poem! And she's only in the second grade - wow!

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Ann : 11:09 AM

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